This article focuses on the "art" of communication. When parents are in a hurry, they don't read—they scan. Using the "What, Who, Where" rule ensures your message gets across in the few seconds of attention they give their screen.
A great alert headline is like a street sign: it should be impossible to misunderstand, even at a glance. To achieve this, every alert you write should answer three simple questions immediately.
Skip the pleasantries and the "fluff." Start with the most important piece of news.
Avoid: "Important information regarding the upcoming weather forecast for our district."
Better: "School Closed Today."
Better: "2-Hour Delayed Start."
Parents often have children in multiple schools. If an alert only applies to a specific group, put that at the front so other parents don't panic unnecessarily.
Avoid: "Bus 12 is delayed for the students who ride it."
Better: "Bus 12 Only: 20-Min Delay."
Better: "Elementary Sites: Early Dismissal."
An alert is a "nudge," not a full report. Use the alert to point them toward the "source of truth."
Tip: If you have a detailed News post or a Transportation status update, mention it!
Example: "Check the Transportation Page for Route 5 details."
Example: "See your email for the full rescheduling plan."
See how much clearer an alert becomes when we apply the rule:
| The "Okay" Headline | The "What, Who, Where" Headline | Why it's better |
| Update on tonight’s game. | HS Football Game Cancelled | Tells you exactly what is happening. |
| Reminder for parents. | K-5 Only: Pyjama Day Tomorrow! | Identifies the specific audience. |
| Power outage issues. | South Campus: No Power. Site Closed. | High urgency and clear location. |
If you find yourself writing a long sentence, try using brackets at the start of your headline to categorize the news. It helps the eye anchor to the most important word:
[WEATHER] School Closed Jan 12
[REMINDER] Graduation Rehearsal at 2 PM
[URGENT] North Entrance Closed: Use East Door